Thursday 30 August 2018

my poem

Wednesday,Saturdays those days are sports days. 
sitting inside   i remember our school has  great pride,
it is July i can see planes fly lying down i can see more fly by,
Image result for poems going to school but suddenly caught a flu i had no clue.
 playing fortnite makes you stay up till midnight

5 comments:

  1. Hi, Tupuia i like your poem it is very fun to read and keep it up.

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  3. Hey tupuia!!! I think your poem was really good.I like how you included rhyming words and kept it funny. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

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  4. Hey Tupuia I really enjoyed your poem because how almost every sentence rhymed. Keep it up!!

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  5. Hey tupuia i really liked your poem. I liked it becuase it almost rhymed but it was still good.Keep it up!!!

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